Fix typos, formatting, and vague language where possible.

Signed-off-by: Loui Chang <louipc.ist@gmail.com>
[Fixed menu.lst: LiveCD -> Live CD -aaron]
Signed-off-by: Aaron Griffin <aaronmgriffin@gmail.com>

9 files changed, 27 insertions, 25 deletions

diff --git a/configs/default/menu.lst b/configs/default/menu.lst
index cf9823f..0852720 100644
--- a/configs/default/menu.lst
+++ b/configs/default/menu.lst
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ default 0
 color light-blue/blue black/light-grey
 splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz
 
-title  Boot ArchLinux LiveCD
+title  Boot Arch Linux Live CD
 kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75%
 initrd /boot/archiso.img
 
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst
index 067985d..b4ddc4c 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ default 0
 color light-blue/blue black/light-grey
 splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz
 
-title  Boot ArchLinux LiveCD
+title  Boot Arch Linux Live CD
 kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75%
 initrd /boot/archiso_pata.img
 
-title  Boot ArchLinux LiveCD [Legacy IDE, no SATA]
+title  Boot Arch Linux Live CD [Legacy IDE, no SATA]
 kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75%
 initrd /boot/archiso_ide.img
 
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt
index b25f56f..7720865 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt
@@ -2,15 +2,15 @@ HOW-TO: Contribute to this help
 -------------------------------
 
 This help is rather simplistic.
-In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a text
-file.  Formatting is important (due to grub limitations).  The files MUST be 80
-characters wide, and 23 lines long.  Any more, and your formatting will be
-corrupted when viewing the help.  Please note that if your help is short, it is
-worthwhile to pad with empty lines, up to 23 lines.
-
-Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the ArchLinux bug
-tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
-
+In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a
+text file.  Formatting is important (due to grub limitations).  The
+files MUST be less than 80 characters wide, and 23 lines long.
+Any more, and your formatting will be corrupted when viewing the help.
+Please note that if your help is short, it is worthwhile to pad with
+empty lines, up to 23 lines.
+
+Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the
+Arch Linux bug tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
 
 
 
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg
index 551956a..5405c49 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 splash.rle
 
-ArchLinux Install and LiveCD                   (0e2009.0107)
+Arch Linux Install and Live CD                 (0e2009.0107)
 
 0eF207 -> more boot options  0eF307 -> Troubleshooting, Help
 
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg
index 86a6af4..8e38bbe 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 
 Boot flavors on this ISO:
 ----------------------------------
-0earch07     : ArchLinux LiveCD [pata] (the Default)
-0earchide07  : ArchLinux LiveCD [legacy IDE mode]
+0earch07     : Arch Linux Live CD [pata] (the Default)
+0earchide07  : Arch Linux Live CD [legacy IDE mode]
 
 0ememtest07  : Run memtest (Memory Testing)
 
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt
index 77417f3..213b3ae 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-ArchLinux LiveCD - 2009.01
+Arch Linux Live CD - 2009.01
       Release Notes
 --------------------------
 
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/instructions b/configs/install-iso/instructions
index b14b456..cdf77ff 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/instructions
+++ b/configs/install-iso/instructions
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
-                            ArchLinux
+                            Arch Linux
                    Installation and Live-CDs
                   ----------------------------
 
-All CDs and USB-Images are installation mediums and Live-CDs,
+All CDs and USB images are installation mediums and Live CDs
 which can be used as maintenance and rescue systems.
 
 FTP-ISOs/Images:
 ----------------
-These are the preferred install mediums for ArchLinux. You get always
-the actual package versions using these mediums.
+These are the preferred install mediums for Arch Linux.
+You can always get up to date packages using these mediums.
 
   archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.iso                  i686/32bit CD-ISO
   archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.img                  i686/32bit USB-Image
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ ISOs with the isolinux bootloader:
 
 Core-ISOs/Images:
 -----------------
-These are for offline installations when no Internet access available
+These are for offline installations when no Internet access is available
 to install the base system.
 
   archlinux-200X.yy-core-i686.iso                 i686/32bit CD-ISO
@@ -33,7 +33,8 @@ to install the base system.
 
 How to use these installation images:
 -------------------------------------
-Please ensure the sha1sum matches that in the SHA1SUMS file in this directory
+Please ensure the sha1sum for your downloaded file matches the checksum
+in the the SHA1SUMS file in this directory.
 
 See section in the "Arch Linux Install Guide":
   http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Official_Arch_Linux_Install_Guide#Pre-Installation
@@ -42,4 +43,5 @@ For the USB-Images see:
 
 Happy installing!
 Happy ARCHing!
-- ArchLinux Release Engineering team
+- Arch Linux Release Engineering team
+
diff --git a/configs/xfce4/Makefile b/configs/xfce4/Makefile
index 6a609fb..f4d3009 100644
--- a/configs/xfce4/Makefile
+++ b/configs/xfce4/Makefile
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # I'm a make retard, there are probably prettier ways of doing this...
 
 WORKING_DIR=$(PWD)/.work
-ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/Archlinux-XFCE4-Live.iso
+ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/archlinux-xfce4-live.iso
 
 all: iso 
 
diff --git a/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst b/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst
index 6755d09..4cd24a3 100644
--- a/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst
+++ b/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ default 0
 color light-blue/blue black/light-grey
 splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz
 
-title  Boot ArchLinux LiveCD
+title  Boot Arch Linux Live CD
 kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75%
 initrd /boot/archiso.img